This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- Chapter 2
Bop!
A dock!
The best laid plans of mice and men.
Talk about gangin agley!
This is gangin all right
Right down to the plank
Lots of planks
And what are those guys down there?
Dock workers?
Who knows
Planks are almost rotten
So where to I go from here
What I had in mind is not in my mind anymore
And I left Cloe somewhere back there
Maybe its good I don’t spell her name right
Then they’ll be looking for all the spellings and have a harder time finding her
Do they want to find her?
Dunno
Dunno what I’m doing here either.
Thing goes all the way down to the water –even under it.
Then up
Messy mess of a line here as it goes up looks like somebody marked territory here all colors paint and such and things – the line runs right across the dock from side to side.
Guy comes up. “Can you give me a loaf of bread,’ he said.
I give him a credit card. That should confuse them.
They aren’t closing my credit account – they want to track me down – my limit’s even gone through the roof. They want me to spend all I want to and catch me. I can get cash here – all I want. Hey that’s good.
Then the guy will spend all he wants to. Then they’ll find him and it won’t be me. Great idea.
Looks like the door has a mind of its own -- can show up anyplace and do anything. This is pretty good.
Well I guess
Didn’t want this to be a guessing game
Except for them
They can guess all they want
As long as they don’t get it right
Actually I don’t anything’s going to happen with them
That is they aren’t going to catch up us
Doesn’t show up in anything
Just the one guy that shrivels up
Don’t know when that happens either
Maybe I can head over to the red landscape with the lake and see what’s going on
Great place that red landscape like nothing I have ever seen. Maybe Cloe’s there.
Blank again
Well not so blank
Still on the dock
Sitting on the dock of the bay watching the tide roll away
With a 347,000 man troop
What’s that?
I don’t know
It just is
Sort of part of the thing
Where it came from I don’t know
It’s just there
It just is you know
Things just are
We are
Where are we
Anywhere? Nowhere?
The door! The door! My kingdom for a door.
This image – a bunch of us on one side of a door and that 347,000 man troop on the other. From overhead – a bunch of dots on either side only on one side a whole lot more than on the other
I am the egg man I am the walrus koo koo ka choo
Gesundheit
It’s white all around
They all are gone
Where to now
Anywhere?
Motel
There’s Cloe
“Where you been?” she asks.
“Dock.” I reply.
“Hot dock!” she exclaims.
“Not really. Not even Coney Island.”
“Ha ha.”
“Ha is a pretty big word.”
“Is that the motel?”
“Yep. Here’s some cash.”
“Where’d you get that?”
“Dock.”
“Oh.”
“Gave this guy a credit card.”
“They’ll think it’s you.”
“Yep.”
A grand smile came over her face.
“We get separate rooms,” she said.
In the Overall Picture?.
Maybe I'm wrong: there IS new information here, confused as it may be, and one can't exactly object to stream-of-consciousness in the monologue under what seem to be the ground rules here.
But this riff struck me as more self-indulgent and less story-friendly than what we encountered earlier.
Eric