General Interest
General Interest
Inoffensive to nearly all readers
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 20
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Thu, 12/18/2008 - 15:48It was a hallway -- a corridor -- couldn't see the walls, but it was nonetheless a corridor -- couldn't move left or right, just straight ahead.
Then ended.
In the reddish landscape. Just POP!
Then there they were: Chloe and Ralph and Brian and Tom and Dick and Harry and Ahmed and Raphael and Jacques.
Ralph?
Chris & Julia's Big Day Chapter 1
Submitted by Sharphawlad on Sun, 12/14/2008 - 14:24Chris & Julia's Big Day
by Sharp 2008
Close Encounters of the Christmas Kind
Submitted by Nick B on Tue, 12/09/2008 - 13:22Close Encounters of the Christmas Kind
My thanks once again go to Gabi for her sympathetic treatment of this story and I have to hope that she reads this version after the post edit additions I made.
I hope it improves the story...
Healing a Princess. . . 28 (Lakeview)
Submitted by Tim Knight on Wed, 11/26/2008 - 17:34
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 19
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 17:54“It’s a door!” I say, “A door upstairs! How’d that happen?
Healing a Princess. . . 27 (Plans, Politics, and Pools)
Submitted by Tim Knight on Wed, 11/12/2008 - 15:37
An X Is A Kiss But Not...
Submitted by Laika on Sun, 11/09/2008 - 17:36And Lo, the traveller came at last to the sky's edge. He put down his staff + poked his head thru the fabric of space, beholding the mighty clockwork of the cosmos, the great turning gears, the merry go round and the ferris wheel. He smelled the heavenly corndogs and heard the calliope music. And he said, "Hey wait for me you guys!"
Healing a Princess. . . 25 (On the Lake)
Submitted by Tim Knight on Thu, 11/06/2008 - 15:25Healing a Princess
(On the Lake)
By Tim Knight
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 18 (added to)
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Thu, 11/06/2008 - 14:25Well, I start to tell my story. Cars rush up to us, lights flashing. Men get out, bullhorn in one’s hand and guns in the hands of others.
Amanda's Eyes - Chapter 10
Submitted by woody on Mon, 11/03/2008 - 02:49Ten - Game Day
Happy Gets Squashed
Submitted by Laika on Mon, 11/03/2008 - 01:08A fantasy adventure set in a strange indoor universe, inhabited by puppets, which is told in the form of a child's book report that keeps wandering off the topic...
Silver Blood-Epilogue
Submitted by stanman on Thu, 10/30/2008 - 04:03Silver Blood-Epilogue
As we lifted away from the now burning city, I heard a voice emit from a solitary figure in the back, "Well done, but there are questions to be answered."
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 17
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Sun, 10/26/2008 - 11:28Wow, the way things happen. So Raphael knows some people. He’s been around. He’s a surprising surprise. Quite the cosmopolitan. He has been helpful.
We are looking over the digs when men come up and talk with Jacques. Jacques comes over with them. They have uniforms on.
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 16
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Thu, 10/23/2008 - 10:26“Mon Dieu!” Raphael exclaimed.
“What is it?”
“La Mer Morte.”
”The Dead Sea?” Chloe asked.
“Quite so,” Raphael said emphatically. “Look at those!! It’s a total row of doors!”
“Yes,” I said.
Raphael moved closer to inspect.
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 15
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Tue, 10/21/2008 - 10:55“We were nothing too.”
“Nothing, too.”
“Nothing too.”
“But you’re not nothing.”
“Nothing exists in the Nothing.”
“Okay,” I said, “let me show you.” And I pulled the door out of my pocket.
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 14
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Mon, 10/20/2008 - 12:09We sit down at Raphael’s restaurant, at a sidewalk table.
“Won’t somebody notice “Pierre” there?” Asks Chloe.
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 13
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Sat, 10/18/2008 - 15:14“Raff!” shouts the sales clerk, “Comment allez vous?”
“Tres bien,” Raphael replies, “Est-ce que tu connais mes amis?”
“Un peu. Porquois ils et tu entre sans habiillement?”
“Long story,” Raphael replies.
Then he turns to me.
Songs of Innocence & Experience
Submitted by Laika on Wed, 10/15/2008 - 12:17TWO TALES OF AMERICAN BOYHOOD...
Silver Blood
Submitted by stanman on Sat, 10/11/2008 - 06:44Amanda's Eyes - Chapter 7
Submitted by woody on Sat, 10/04/2008 - 22:25Seven – The Shock
...Even more strange, she’d just spent at least half an hour in the presence of other people without shouting at anyone, without cursing, without really thinking at all about not being able to see. Just what was she really feeling?
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Amanda's Eyes - Chapter 6
Submitted by woody on Sat, 09/27/2008 - 16:34Let's shift gears a little and look at events from Amanda's point of view. Let me know if you like the shift in focus.
Six – Life Sucks
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 12
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Wed, 09/24/2008 - 17:44Nobody’s watching as I look around to see if anybody’s watching. There’s the door. Here I am. There’s everybody else.
This is an Unexpected Bump for Sure -- 11
Submitted by Dale M. Cannon on Thu, 09/18/2008 - 17:04“That is quite all right,” Chloe replies, “I think we should consider other matters.”
A 23rd Century Girl in the 20th Century, Chapter 15
Submitted by Starla Anne on Fri, 09/12/2008 - 15:07
Okay, I may have stepped a little over the science fiction line in this story, but I am headed in a certain direction and I hope there aren't too many objections.
Linda’s New Life
Chapter 15
Amanda's Eyes - Chapter 5
Submitted by woody on Sun, 09/07/2008 - 14:21Sometimes something you do on impulse, without stopping to think about it, has a huge impact on your life. Sometimes that impact is even positive.
Amanda's Eyes - Chapter 4
Submitted by woody on Wed, 09/03/2008 - 17:15This chapter has a scene with a mild sexual situation. If that disturbs you I'm sorry but I felt it was important to the plot. Remember how things can change in the course of a weekend when you are a teenager?
