Ghost hunters

 

© 2012 Nick B

 

“What was that?” Bob asked, looking about nervously.

“It was nothing alright, nothing.” Stan was already getting fed up and they’d only been in there for ten minutes.

“But I’m sure I heard something,” Bob whispered.

“You didn’t hear anything,” Stan groaned. “How many times have I got to tell you?”

Down the darkened hallway they went, Bob looking about, eyes searching out anything at all that could possibly create the slightest sound.

“Follow me,” Stan told him, heading for the stairs.

Half way down …

“There!” Bob hissed, his eyes wide as he grabbed Stan.

“Alright, that was a noise.”

“What are we going to do?”

“What we’re here to do. Check it out and then …”

“But what if it’s—”

“We don’t know what it is until we get there and anyway, it’s not going to be anything to worry about. God, why did I have to get teamed up with you?”

“It’s not my fault,” Bob replied, petulantly. “I get jumpy.”

“You don’t say.”

“I do.”

“Just follow me. The sound seemed to come from the kitchen area. It’s probably just mice.”

“Must be huge mice.”

“Shhh!”

“Ooh, Sor-ry! What flea’s got up your butt?”

“You, you stupid—”

They stopped as another sound, much louder than the first came from the direction they were heading in.

Bob grabbed Stan in a vice-like grip.

Get off me!

Bob let go, but stayed close – very close. “I saw a shadow. That was a shadow! It moved across the back wall there.”

“I know,” Stan agreed. “I saw it too. You don’t think it could be—?”

Stan’s sentence was cut short as two figures could be seen along the far wall, barely visible in the darkness, but their faces seemed to glow in a pulsating green light.

“What the—!” Bob exclaimed in a hoarse whisper.

“Shhh!”

Bob mouthed ‘sorry’ and made a ‘zip’ motion across his mouth. 

“Okay,” Stan whispered. “Let’s see if we can get closer.”

“Closer?!”

“Yes, you idiot, closer. How do we know for sure it’s not a trick of the light?”

“Sure. Trick of the light. Right,” Bob said, sarcastically. “Like that was a trick of the light. That was definitely two—”

“For heaven’s sake, shut up will you?”

Tip-toeing across the space between them and the glowing forms, Bob and Stan inched forward, trying not to alert the figures to their presence until …

“Ready?” Stan asked.

“Ready,” Bob agreed.

“Right Bob; heads off. Don’t forget, hold yours at about waist height and make the moans as desperate and chilling as possible …”

The last thing the two ghosts saw of Dave Tango and Steve Gonsalves was their backs as they sprinted out of the kitchen, down the hallway and out of the front door, screaming like little girls.

Thanks...

...for posting a story here. I feel like a ghost myself sometimes, checking in a few times a week.

Anyway, a cute Monty Python-type reversal.

Eric

Thanks, Eric

It was actually a quickie that got written in about ten minutes for G+. I liked it so much that I decided to post here and see how it went.

So far so good and thanks for the comment.

Nick B

Nice story NickB

Nice story Nick, I will be posting more of the voice and Jasons adventures when i get time, life has been a bit hectic and it's hard to get time to do the things i enjoy most. any spare time I do get i have been putting into writing The Girl inside the Boy on BC.  

  Hugs Roo :)   

I know how you feel, Roo

I have similar issues.

As you may have read on my blog, I'm trying to resurrect The Sight and Second Sight, an unfinished story I began back in February of 2008. Wow! That's four years ago!

This one took ten minutes to write and I liked it so I posted it. Most of my time though is going into the rework of the above-mentioned story.

Above all, you have to do what you can when you can, so keep up the good work

Nick B

Funny!

I have to admit, when I first read it, I was a bit confused, and wondering what the joke was. Yeah, I can be a little slow. Nyaah. :-P

On rereading the last part, I (finally) got the joke, and had to reread the whole story. Very clever! Nice Short story. Well done!

Wren

Coo, thanks Wren

Yeah, we get a lot of that programme over here and I think we've seen every episode, so it seemed a nifty wheeze to turn the tables somewhat :)

Nick B

christian louboutin

christian louboutin shoes
cheap jordans
kate spade outlet
ray ban sunglasse
pandora charm
fred perry polo
longchamp outlet
coach outlet canada
cheap jordans
coach outlet
cheap nfl jerseys
polo outlet
true religion jeans
coach factory outlet
cheap nfl jerseys
michael kors outlet
christian louboutin outlet
polo ralph lauren
true religion outlet
ugg outlet
pandora jewelry
air jordan 4
cheap nfl jerseys
yeezy boost
air max 90
ugg outlet
true religion jeans
pandora outlet
oakley sunglasses
birkenstock outlet
hermes belts
canada goose outlet
adidas outlet
air jordan retro
polo ralph lauren
polo outlet
pandora jewelry
mlb jerseys wholesale
ralph lauren uk
polo outlet
prada handbags
adidas nmd
coach outlet
moncler outlet
michael kors outlet
ugg outlet
lacoste outlet
mbt shoes
coach outlet
polo ralph lauren
lebron james shoes
lunette ray ban
true religion jeans
canada goose outlet
true religion outlet
nike shoes
polo outlet
polo ralph lauren
kate spade outlet
canada goose outlet
true religion outlet store
pandora charms
tory burch outlet
coach outlet
polo ralph lauren pas cher
cheap ray bans sunglasses
coach outlet
nike shoes outlet
fred perry polo shirts
uggs canada
nfl jerseys
pandora charms
kate spade outlet
mbt shoes
coach outlet
coach outlet online
oakley sunglasses wholesale
michael kors handbags
yeezy boost 350
kate spade outlet
clarks shoes
gucci outlet
polo outlet
ugg outlet
pandora jewelry
coach outlet
michael kors outlet
polo ralph lauren
mcm outlet
kate spade outlet
canada goose jackets
nhl jerseys
canada goose jackets
cheap nfl jerseys
yaoxuemei20180615

pandora jewelry canada goose

pandora jewelry
canada goose outlet
polo outlet
coach factory outlet
pandora outlet
pandora outlet
supreme outlet
coach outlet
coach factory outlet
ray ban sunglasses
coach factory outlet
ferragamo shoes
nike shoes
mulberry handbags
adidas yeezy
canada goose outlet
fred perry polo shirts
canada goose outlet
true religion outlet
michael kors outlet
christian louboutin shoes
pandora charms
ray ban sunglasses
michael kors outlet
coach outlet
michael kors outlet
adidas nmd
mbt shoes
yeezy boost
coach outlet
canada goose outlet
christian louboutin outlet
michael kors handbags
michael kors outlet
mlb jerseys
fred perry polo
michael kors outlet
pandora outlet
coach outlet
coach outlet online
coach outlet
cheap nfl jerseys
christian louboutin shoes
cheap mlb jerseys
pandora jewelry
fred perry outlet
nfl jerseys wholesale
pandora jewelry
uggs outlet
ugg outlet
polo ralph lauren
superdry clothing
pandora jewelry
ugg boots
coach factory outlet
uggs canada
uggs outlet
michael kors outlet clearance
michael kors outlet
coach outlet
coach outlet
adidas outlet
michael kors outlet
nike shoes outlet
nike air max
coach outlet
uggs outlet
pandora outlet
ray ban sunglasse
polo outlet
cheap nfl jerseys
true religion jeans
christian louboutin
coach outlet
polo ralph lauren
polo outlet
polo outlet
michael kors outlet
ugg boots clearance
valentino outlet
ugg outlet
michael kors outlet
michael kors outlet clearance
hermes belts
canada goose outlet
cheap snapbacks
longchamp handbags
nike outlet
pandora charms
fitflops sale clearance
mbt shoes
tory burch outlet
mont blanc pens
nike huarache
coach outlet
canada goose jackets
coach outlet online
canada goose outlet
coach outlet
cheap ray bans sunglasses
cheap nfl jerseys
nike shoes
canada goose outlet
oakley sunglasses wholesale
birkenstock shoes
coach outlet
canada goose outlet
yeezy boost 350
canada goose outlet
kobe bryant shoes
ralph lauren outlet
pandora jewelry outlet
kate spade outlet
michael kors outlet
canada goose outlet
michael kors outlet
lacoste outlet
uggs outlet
polo ralph lauren pas cher
kate spade outlet
nike trainers
puma outlet
cheap jordans
kate spade outlet
mlb jerseys wholesale
pandora outlet
red bottom shoes
michael kors outlet
moncler jackets
ugg boots
christian louboutin outlet
pandora charms
canada goose outlet
pandora outlet
polo ralph lauren
tory burch outlet
adidas nmd shoes
oakley sunglasses wholesale
polo outlet
pandora outlet
mcm handbags
giuseppe zanotti outlet
nike outlet
nike shoes
ugg outlet
canada goose outlet
true religion jeans
fitflops sale clearance
ralph lauren polo
polo ralph lauren
polo ralph lauren
true religion outlet
mbt shoes
nfl jerseys wholesale
coach outlet online
ugg boots
nike outlet
ralph lauren shirts
polo ralph lauren
coach outlet
pandora outlet
polo ralph lauren
christian louboutin outlet
kate spade handbags
polo ralph lauren
fitflops sale clearance
nike kyrie 3
adidas shoes
adidas nmd
polo ralph lauren
air jordan shoes
ugg outlet
ugg outlet
kate spade outlet
michael kors outlet
coach outlet
coach outlet
mont blanc pens
pandora charms sale clearance
nike outlet
lunette ray ban
ralph lauren outlet
pandora jewelry
kate spade outlet
nike outlet
michael kors outlet
polo shirts
converse
prada handbags
coach outlet
michael kors uk
tory burch outlet
michael kors outlet
coach outlet
kate spade outlet
coach outlet
canada goose outlet
mulberry handbags
true religion outlet
yaoxuemei20180616

Comment viewing options

Select your preferred way to display the comments and click "Save settings" to activate your changes.
Powered by Drupal, an open source content management system