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Submitted by Starla Anne on Fri, 07/11/2008 - 10:14.
The Adventures of Lizzie Jane is my baby. I never expect to write anything else like it and I hope that all of you and everyone else will accept the newly revised version. When I read it, I can see places where I put my heart and soul into the story.
I have grown Lizzie Jane from a young, innocent girl -- fearful and timid -- to a strong, braver young lady, who finds her true love (the hard way) -- and, in another story, marries him. Through it all, I have tried to install the same sweet personality in her all the way through.
I wish some of you would comment. Right now, I need encourgement and constructive criticism.
Is it worth the attempts to get it published?
Love, Starla Anne
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Yes, You Have Indeed Kept Lizzie Jane Pure, As For :-)
Comments and constructive criticism, maybe she needs to face a crisis of some sort that will help her to grow in her faith. May Your Light Forever Shine